When I wrote my novel Owl Dance almost fifteen years ago, I had the idea that the protagonist, Ramon Morales, would meet a Captain Nemo-like character who I called Onofre Cisneros. In the novel, he attacks ships with his submarine, the Legado, in an attempt to show its worth as a weapon. In the years since, I’ve realized that Cisneros also was something of a response to Ragnar Daneskjöld from Ayn Rand’s Atlas Shrugged, a pirate who robs from the poor to give to the rich. Cisneros basically was an engineering genius who wanted the world to recognize his abilities, but because he came from Mexico, investors in the United States and Europe didn’t take him seriously. In Owl Dance, Cisneros gets turned onto a better path and he ends up playing a major role in three of the four Clockwork Legion novels along with my parallel-universe novella Revolution of Air and Rust, where an older Cisneros teams up with Pancho Villa.
When Danielle Ackley-McPhail invited me to write a story for the anthology Other Aether, I wanted to investigate the circumstances that made Cisneros who he was when he’s introduced in Owl Dance. All I had really written was that he was introduced to the work of Spanish Inventor Narcís Monturiol i Estarriol and improved on his submarine design. I hadn’t really put a lot of thought into his childhood and how he came to his adopted home of Ensenada, Mexico, which wouldn’t have existed at the time of his birth. While reading and thinking about my story, I was struck by how many armed conflicts took place on Mexican soil between the early nineteenth through the early twentieth centuries. There was the Mexican War of Independence, Spain’s attempts to reconquer Mexico, the Mexican-American War, the French invasions of Mexico, and the Mexican Revolution, just to name a few. It would be hard to grow up in Mexico in that period and not be touched by warfare.
I realized that Onofre Cisneros would have been just about the right age to have been a boy during the Mexican-American War and I also realized that an important battle happened in Northeastern New Mexico, not far from the town where my parents lived when first married, which is Las Vegas, New Mexico. In 1847, the United States government had claimed New Mexico as U.S. Territory, but no treaties had been signed and the Mexican-American war was still in progress. Word had reached the U.S. Army that over 150 men had gathered in the village of Mora to strike U.S. forces. For reasons not entirely clear, Captain Israel Hendley decided to strike the Mexican militia in Mora with a force of only 80 men and no artillery support. The U.S. force was driven off and Hendley was killed. Despite that, the army took fifteen people prisoner and killed 25.
A little over a week later, the U.S. Army returned to Mora under the command of Captain Jesse Morin. This time they brought over 200 men and two Howitzers. They literally razed the village of Mora to the ground. Those who weren’t killed fled to the nearby mountains. I imagined that Cisneros was one of those who fled with some of his family while the screams of uncles and aunts rang in his ears. This is only a small part of the story, but it plants the seeds of Cisneros’s bitterness. What’s more, the area around Mora is familiar to me and, for a time, I even served on the board of the New Mexico Center of the Book with a librarian from Mora.
There are likely a few more chapters in Cisneros’s life to connect the dots between the events of “No One Alone” and Owl Dance. The whole story could possibly be a novella. It’s certainly something to think about, especially since Tangent Online gave my story in Other Aether a nice review. The reviewer described the story as “beautifully heartbreaking” which was exactly what I was going for. You can read the complete review here: https://tangentonline.com/print-other/other-aether-tales-of-global-steampunk-ed-by-greg-schauer-danielle-ackley-mcphail/
Other Aether was funded as part of eSpec Books’ Picking Up Steam campaign and copies should be shipping soon. If you missed the campaign, you can pre-order the anthology at: https://www.amazon.com/Other-Aether-Tales-Global-Steampunk-ebook/dp/B0CW1FRMR5/
A major part of the Clockwork Legion novels is showing the healing journey Onofre Cisneros undergoes. The series starts in Owl Dance, which you can learn about here: http://davidleesummers.com/owl_dance.html
Finally, if you want to see Cisneros’s adventures with Pancho Villa, check out the novella Revolution of Air and Rust: http://davidleesummers.com/Air-and-Rust.html